Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Growing

When I'm writing a new poem, I often find myself comparing people to other things without directly saying what the comparison is. This poem does just that. I intended it to be a poem that describes a person going through life and it's challenges, figuring out who they are and what they are meant to become.
Growing
It's damp
and dark
and cold.
I feel a need to break free.
I push, and struggle
to break open this cage
no more slumber
no more darkness
nothing will hold me back.
The cage is open.
I've broken loose
but I don't feel free.
It's still dark.
I stretch.
I know only one direction:
up.
As I reach up
I anchor myself.
The more I reach,
the more need
I have
to cling
to what I have known
for my entire life.
I've lost track of time.
My progress is slow.
I feel I might never 
reach my destination,
and I almost give up.
A final burst of strength
surges through me
and I reach
one      last      time.
The darkness breaks apart
I am blinded
by the sudden light.
I can still feel the darkness below,
anchoring me.
But up here I am
filled with warmth.
This new-found warmth
and light
gives me strength
and I still reach.
Excitement
of my success
makes me feel radiant
and I realize I'm not done.
I am closed up
and I need to unfold.
For a moment
I feel dejected.
How long must this go on?
But the light continues to shine 
and encourage me 
to keep going.
My progress is still slow
but full of purpose
and preparation for the day
I finally unfold
and fully
embrace the light.

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